Midnight Monsters (project 4 - part 4)

With the second dummy book I tried to tackle the issues the first one had. The most important ones being: to improve the pacing in the middle, to feature only one monster (two seemed to be confusing to my test audience), to show the growth of the monster and its shadow, to add spread 12 and to add more words to the narrative.

I made four extra storyboards before I found the right combination:

Storyboard 13/16

Storyboard 14/16

Storyboard 15/16

Storyboard 16/16

Some of the newly added images had come from earlier sketchbook drawings. I also drew a few new images to come to the final storyboard:

This then resulted in my second dummy book for Midnight Monsters: